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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题犯罪类 - 青少年犯罪与司法
关键词young people, serious crimes, punished, same way as adults, differently
考察能力平衡司法公正与青少年保护

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 问题具象化:assault, robbery, murder
├── 核心问题:same standards or different?
├── 立场:accountability essential + prioritise rehabilitation
└── 理由:greater capacity for change

【主体段1 - 支持同等处罚】
├── 核心框架:justice and public safety
├── 论点1:victims suffer equally
├── 论点2:deterrence effect
└── 论点3:ongoing risks to society

【主体段2 - 支持区别对待】
├── 核心框架:neuroscience and rehabilitation
├── 论点1:adolescent brain not fully developed
├── 论点2:less culpable, peer pressure
├── 论点3:more responsive to rehabilitation
└── 反面论证:adult prison produces worse outcomes

【主体段3 - 综合观点】
├── 立场:balanced approach needed
├── 原则:juvenile system distinct, emphasis on rehabilitation
├── 例外:most serious offences, older teenagers
└── 方法:case-by-case assessment

【结尾段】
├── 让步:serious crimes demand serious responses
├── 反对:treating all identically ignores reality
└── 方案:firm and flexible, accountable + pathways

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
warrant值得,使有必要their youth warrants different treatment
perpetrator犯罪者regardless of the perpetrator's age
deterrence威慑there is also a deterrence argument
culpable应受责备的less culpable for their actions
susceptible to易受...影响的susceptible to peer pressure
self-fulfilling prophecy自我实现的预言treating them as irredeemable becomes a self-fulfilling prophecy
premeditation预谋demonstrate premeditation
foreclose排除,阻止forecloses opportunities for reform

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"victims suffer equally regardless of..."任何需要强调后果的话题
"adolescent brain is not fully developed"儿童/青少年相关话题
"more responsive to intervention"教育、康复、改革话题
"self-fulfilling prophecy"任何讨论标签化效果的话题
"case-by-case assessment rather than blanket rules"政策灵活性话题

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